Tianzi

at Tianzi Mountains,
jagged rock-hard erections
piercing fog-made skirts


32 comments:

  1. Well now! Lots to love in that imagery!

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    1. How yummy is the world when we have "love to love." ;-)

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  2. Ha! There's an analogy to make me smile.
    :-)

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    1. I must confess that it made me giggle, too. ;-)

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  3. Oh wow, that could not be more perfect!!!!!!!

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    1. Well, gracias, querida Sherry. ;-)

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  4. Piercing imagery, Magaly :)

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    1. "Piercing" seems to be a good word around these parts. ;-)

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  5. Love, love, love! Naughty, clever girl!

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  6. Ow. Er, I meant "wow!" ;-)

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    1. I love it when your words get all confused. ;-)

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  7. Umm...yup! I love this...but how could I not!! Great perspective and thank you for joining, Maglay!!

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  8. I'm still smiling, Magaly!! :)
    (no more words here ~~ )
    ..

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  9. And who couldn't use a rock-hard...oh, um...beautiful picture and beautiful words. :-D

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  10. what a beautiful Haiku...

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  11. Rock-hard eh? ;) hehe Though that picture makes me want to build a tiny cottage to live in and escape from the world!

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    1. Maybe get an eagle as a cottage mate. If not, the climb down might be a tad problematic, lol!

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  12. Oh my goodness ... how many ways are there to say I love this!

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    1. I think I just heard many in my head. Thank you. ;-)

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  13. unspeakably good
    sometimes people can get a lucky shot with haiku
    but I don't think yours is luck related.

    Is this a bounce off of Magpies?
    by the way. if you want lemons, look no further

    cheers,

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    1. Let's just say that I spent some time thinking about the Daughter of Heaven. Where are her mountains? I doubt she is totally pleased with the whole thing, lol.

      Ah, I shall follow the lemon scent...

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  14. I'm really glad I'm not the only one who giggled at "rock-hard erections." Makes me feel less juvenile. Sort of.

    :)

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    1. The sound of "rock-hard erections" makes a soul giggle at any age, methinks.

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  15. A sexy haiku! Not often one can say that, so brava!

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  16. I know I commented on this. I don't know where my comment went?
    All, I can say is, I can't stop smiling ;o) LOL!
    Hugs ;o)

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