WOW Just wow.......
"WOW Just wow......." does it every time ;-D
"you create your own story..." Great job! Thanks, Magaly!
I'm so excited that there will be more.
As am I...
<<< craving Butterscotch
You've just given me an Idea, my dear Eliora!
I haven't read the first parts, but I definitely enjoyed the ending! Great concept, and Mattilina Thorn is a wonderful name for a character!
I'm so happy you were able to enjoy the last bit without reading the entire thing!
Woo! A red hat with black feathers, an armored dyad, *&* your take on a mermaid :)) Yea!
I'm smiling way too much reading these comments. I think I heard your "Yea!"
Oh my gosh! You had me good! Thank you and yes, more in the Spring. I really love the idea of different versions of the tale being to confuse the Trads. Very clever and very clever wrong-footing us about the tale. Yes, Disney got it so wrong!
When in doubt add some metal and a couple of a tentacles ;-D
The Japanese are big on that, aren't they? So I'm told...
Hahaha! You have totally made me laugh way to loud for this hour of the morning. Love it! ;-D
Magaly, you my Wicked friend, are a true writing Goddess, I can't wait till 2014, guess I'll just have to reread Thorn In Red many times to hold me over :)
I hope you enjoy every reading. And I'm sure you'll have something else to read in between *wink, wink*
Your imagination is wonderful. I love the monsters, the love story and the Red Ridinghood influences. I also like your language, how you shape your sentences.My only issue is that it that the story is a little heavy on back and forth dialog. I could have used a larger ratio of background story, explanations and descriptions to form more of a moving picture in my mind.
My imagination says, "Thank you." ;-) I'm glad you feel that way about my monsters, for I love them as much as I love the sweet creatures. Stories can't be complete without all of them, right?You are correct and then some about the mile-a-minute-and-kind-of-bare nature of my storytelling (at least my first drafts). My writing will probably always stay on the lighter side when it comes to descriptions, but I tend to move through important parts. When I revise and rewrite Thorn in Red, I will fill those rushed through moments. I might ask you to take a look for me, after I'm done. *cough, cough*
Oh my, I would be very honored to be assigned such a task. But you should know that, compared to many, I am not really much of a literary person.
Brilliant, my Magaly. I will forever have a special fondness for Little Red Riding Hood and especially butterscotch. But mostly, I sit in awe at how your writing both in story and sentence beauty only grows more and more. Warmest hugs, Mina
Let's hope that this is just a small mythical tree, which will turn into a forest of yummy tales. Hugs right back at you ;-)
Yeh, she got the axe ;o) Now I want some butterscotch candy and the kiss too ;o) LOL! Fantastic Magaly!!! Big Hugs ;o)
I want some butterscotch, too!
Wow, I really enjoyed this and I am so happy there will be more. Loved it!
I'm glad you did ;-)