Let Me Love Your Wild and Naked

Let me be cartographer of your flesh.
With fingers, lips and tongue,
I want to map desires down the line of your back.

Let me explore Tasmania in the Caribbean of your skin.
With eyes, dreams and imagination,
I want to map wild valleys and Nature-made mountains...

Let me see gravity at its sensual best.
With verse, song and music,
I want to love your wild and naked every second of forever.

Amanda Palmer is wise,
You look perfect… free and wild.
Ricardo Arjona is right… you would have been born clothed,
if Nature thought splendor had to be camouflaged. 

for Imaginary Garden with Real Toads (July 14, 2014)
for Magpie Tales 147
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    1. I've always loved the word "luscious" I might have to write something about it. About the way it makes my ears tingle and my tongue do silly things ;-)

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    1. Hope you enjoyed every bite ;-)

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  3. This is one wild journey ... loved it!!!

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    1. Wild journeys are always full of fun surprises. They aren't always great, but always fun... if we make them, right?

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  4. Very sensuous and lustful.. Love it!

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    1. In one posts I get comments with my two favorite words, "lustful" the other one is "luscious," I might have to do something about all this goodness ;-)

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  5. Let me see gravity at its sensual best.
    With verse, song and music

    Who wouldn't enjoy that?:) Clever Mag, thanks.

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    1. Seeing that good old "I love what see" look in a lover's face is... yes, enjoyable ;-)

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  6. This is a gorgeous take.

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  7. Yum....sexy!! Love
    Hugs
    SueAnn

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    1. Take another bite and then grin ;-)

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    1. I would say that sexy is my middle name, but that's a lie, so I will just be happy ;-)

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  9. Sensuously alive and licking..oops!.. kicking! Nicely Magaly!

    Hank

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    1. I will take "alive and licking" ;-)

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  10. *sighing some more* :) XXX

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    1. I've been doing a lot of "sighing some more," too ;-)

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  11. Love it, so delectable =]

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    1. Glad you love the taste of it ;-)

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  12. ...what a sexy read... oozing in a variety of ways... like you i looked at this prompt like a camouflage... a most interesting one... great write... smiles...

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    1. "oozing in a variety of ways..." I like what you do with words ;-)

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  13. Magaly what a sensual poem.... really enjoyed it...

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    1. Sensuality speaks so loud, doesn't it? I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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  14. "Splendor" indeed. Maybe more so because it takes -- costs -- so much to get to this sort of naked. Loved it.

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  15. This is just gorgeous poetry! I am so glad I had the opportunity to read it today. Your imagery reminds me of Neruda in its bold comparisons.

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    1. I wrote this after an evening loving words... I'm pretty sure I was drunk on García Lorca's "Romance Sonámbulo" and Neruda's Memoirs.

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  16. i agree with Kerry, it reminds me a little of the mindset of Neruda. sensual with a tinge of the real. love the pic prompt.

    gracias

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    1. I love the picture, too, Marcoantonio. I was reminded of it after reading "Here, The Land, by Mama Zen. She painted such a biological picture of the land with her poetry.

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  17. Beautiful sensuality..."Let me see gravity at its sensual best." Just one line of the whole I love.

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  18. sensual imagery, love where you went with this.

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  19. What they said. Just letting you know i was here!
    "Let me explore Tasmania in the Caribbean of your skin."
    and especially: "if Nature thought splendor had to be camouflaged."
    !!!

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    1. Always so happy to read you here. ;-)

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  20. I love the sensuality ~ Thanks for linking it up ~

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  21. Nice write, very sensuous, good use of imagery. Have a nice Monday

    Much love...

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  22. This reminds me of an old Michael Franks song called "Popsicle Toes" because of the lyrics that start at 2:35. It was a fun song, just like your poem.

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OASbreYVQc0

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    1. "You got the nicest North America." Truly love that.

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  23. (swoon) Garçon! A cold shower for Mr Newbery!

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  24. "Let me explore Tasmania in the Caribbean of your skin." I'm really speechless...this is wonderful, the images, the particular words, the heat... oh

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    1. "oh" is good around here. Thanks so much for stopping by. ;-)

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  25. sensuous and so well expressed!! Love it and welcome to the Garden, Magaly!!

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  26. This is one of the most sensual things I have read in a very long time. It made my breath catch! I felt a little like a voyeur that could not look away because it was so very beautiful!

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    1. I'm always trying to make your "breath catch", so yay!

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