Sex Witch (The Haunting, Part 4)
Thursday, June 21, 2012
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Delicious, but I want more! I can't get enough of The Haunting.
ReplyDeleteSo needy, my gods! lol
DeleteMore!
ReplyDeleteI see the neediness is contagious ;-)
Delete*whew* The ladies are fine. Good thing Ele isn't given to truly foul language, eh?
ReplyDeleteYou know, at first I was only going to share half of this part, then I figured that I might get beat up if I didn't say more about what was going on with Ele and Eme. Yes, I'm a coward lol
DeleteAnd yes, that Ele wouldn't curse a fly lol
Is it weird of me to want to meet a ciguapa, now? ;)
ReplyDeleteI don't think it's weird at all. I think many of us would want to *grin* and of course, giant chickens, too ;-)
Deleteyes! keep going...more!
ReplyDeleteand if there's (ever) an end...i want to print it all out and read in one sitting!!
More you shall get, lol. Read on!
DeleteFun! I love the sex magic. If they insist on waiting, maybe she has time for a recharge. ;-)
ReplyDeleteHa! How did I know someone would say that. I think that the thought is in the air, but who knows, romance can be quite complicated in the company of a couple of watchful crows ;-)
Deleteoh yes, sex magic....how delicious and compelling. And now I have to wait????? I will with anticipation. This is a delight.
ReplyDeleteOma Linda
It is a delicious writing experience, too. Yes, you'll have to wait a bit, but just three more days. Then you'll experience some hurt magic. I'm quite excited about it.
DeleteLove it <3
ReplyDeleteYay! I'm very glad ;-)
DeleteAmazing!!! The crows have been with Leo since he has been 7! Excellent! And, now Luna, can understand the crows, cool!!! Sex magic, yummy! You've got my mind going in all directions! I hope the crows don't get jealous! Nice to be introduced to Luna's aunt!!!
ReplyDeleteCan't wait till the next part!! Big Hugs ;o)
Ele and Eme keep on surprising me. Seriously, when I started writing "The Haunting" the two crow were supposed to be in one scene, that was it, now it seems the story can't go on without them. I sure hope they don't get jealous lol Oh, and I'm very excited to learn/write more about Aunt Estrella.
DeleteSo happy the crows are in the entire story ;o)
DeleteI've read through this one a couple of times, and I get more each time.
ReplyDeleteDitto lol
DeleteSorry I took so long to get to this; I'm almost caught up on blogs now, but I ended up about a week behind. Anyway, it's great; these cliff hanger endings are killing me though!
ReplyDeleteAs regards edits...
"Eme wants to know if you don't have any witch friends..." and "ask her if she doesn't know a witch..." don't sound right to me... this one's a personal opinion thing maybe - or possibly ask some others - but I think they sound better without the "don't" and "doesn't"... "Eme wants to know if you have any witch friends...." and "ask her if she knows...."
"What we did felt great, really great, but it's doesn't..." should be "it" not "it's"
Can't have a proper serial without a few killer cliffhangers, you know? lol
DeleteMy oh my! Things are really steaming up here! My computer monitor keeps fogging up and I have to keep towels on hand to wipe away the steamy heady mist ..... and did I mention the little stars that are twinkling and swirling around the room?
ReplyDeleteThe suspense is growing and intensity mounting ... where will Luna and Leo take us next? Tis sure to be somewhere strange, tantalizing, exotic and new ...
I hope your computer fan is working because, "Witch Food," part 5, has inspired a couple of cold showers already ;-)
DeleteHow did I miss this post!!!!!Got to go read part 5 now bye...*whoosh* :DXXX
ReplyDeleteLate is better than never, right? And sometimes, late means you can have multiples... um, doubles, I meant doubles ;-)
DeleteI love the way everything is coming along. I hadn't realized that Jeff was a witch and am now intrigued to know what more is happening beyond his door. I love Luna's aunt and her eccentric mannerisms. ;-)
ReplyDeleteLuna's true form sounds so beautifully esoteric and her relationship with Leo (or attraction) at this point is so solid! And of course I love Eme and Ele.
I have been discovering things about Jeff and all the other characters as I write. I'm not sure I knew he was a witch when I started writing...
DeleteOh, and Estrella is a darling, isn't she?
Trust me dear, it needed four thousand words to be told.
ReplyDeleteThe part about the mirrors gave me shivers.
I'll tell you why via email.
I can't wait to hear about why the mirrors gave you shivers!
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