The Inbetween (The Haunting, Part 3)
Tuesday, June 12, 2012
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Good stuff. Very tasty. Need more...
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And more I shall give you, my Zombie Goddess. The next part was a delight to write ;-)
DeleteNice!
ReplyDeleteWell, gracias!
DeleteI really need to print it and read it!!!! :))
ReplyDeleteRead on, my darling Simona ;-)
DeleteGah!!! What? Why do you keep torturing me like this? I get totally engrossed in your story and BAM! "in our next exciting episode..."
ReplyDeleteI am loving every word of this story...me wants MORE!!!! :D XXX
And me shall gives you MORE ;-)
DeleteThanks for your excitement. It was really difficult to split this part from the next and I was a tad nervous about the possibility of inducing boredom.
Mags, I am an idiot.
ReplyDeleteI cannot make the links to part two open and only had a chance to read part one before this part came out.
I hate Google Chrome.
Will try to open it in IE.
If I can't make it work will you email it to me?
P.S. Mulberry Wine is a very old recipe in my family and has a lot more than alcohol in it. We only make it from fresh picked and aged berries and only during the fall.
I LOVE mulberries. I was so surprised when I realized so many people think of them as garbage. How weird, huh? I might have to try that wine...
DeleteI hope Google Chrome is more generous in the future ;-(
I like it! :)
ReplyDeleteA couple of small edits...
"I didn't know ciguapas could read thought." - probably should be "thoughts"... Multiple thoughts rather than just one, I would think anyway.
"There is mara blood in on my hands" - the "in" shouldn't be there.
"How did you know Sweet Tooth bled on this berries?" - should be "these" not "this"
Glad you liked it, and thanks for the edits ;-)
DeleteWow. Amazing as always my friend. Cant' wait to read more.
ReplyDeleteDo you plan on publishing any time soon?
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Thanks, lady. It has been a while, nice to read you again. I've already published some things, the latest AlmaMia Cienfuegos (on the sidebar and on Amazon). If you stop by my website, you can see the upcoming schedule ;-)
DeleteWhat "thing" ran into Leo's Mom's house? Shouldn't Luna & Leo be checking out his Mom's house NOW? So ... who's more important ... Leo's Mom or his bro? I want to jump into the story and tell Luna and Leo to find out about the "thing" in his Mom's house, make sure she is OK and then high tail it over to his bro's house!
ReplyDeleteIf Leo can run like a cheetah with his claws exposed, maybe Luna should jump on his back and hitch a ride!?
The "InBetween"? Another dimension to this story is unfolding .... oh my!
Oh, I'm almost jumping on my seat thinking about the next few installments. You are going to love them. I can't quite tell you what's going on yet, but I can't share this link: http://www.magalyguerrero.com/2012/03/being-drake.html it sheds a tiny bit of light on the issue.
DeleteJust a couple of installments and some of the questions will be answer. You get me all giggly ;-)
LOVE mulberries too, as a child gorged with siblings & cousins up a tree at my dad's parents who had a huge tree in their yard (& a home made putt-putt course... anyway, it's like they are sooooo expensive ($8 a handful) for fresh mulberries in Queensland (that's 'if' you can get them) last time I stood with them in my hands for 5 mins before I put them back LOL... garbage my foot, they are gold (taste as well as price)! Yes & there is a story... & I love it, those crows are so cool, & love the way Luna needs Leo as translator... something that I didn't pick up on is the cat & witch thing (I know so obvious now I think about it)... Leo/lion/big cat) & Luna witch... I think I got swept away in the sexual tension & missed that oh so cute pairing of a witch & her cat :)
ReplyDeleteWell, don't feel too bad because I didn't pick it up either lol
DeleteI'm telling you, this characters create their own world. Most of the time I'm just typing for them. How cool that you noticed; Luna has a kitty!
And I just had a bunch of mulberries today. There are a bunch of trees by my school and I picked some. There were a few people looking at me like I had either lost my marbles or was picking poo from a tree. Weird.
No problem. Now, hurry up and post the next part already; you're killing me here! LOL!
ReplyDeleteOh Tori, you know I delight on killing you a little lol Just a few days, and there will be more to read ;-)
DeleteOk, now I know what the crows can do, very cool ;o) And, Sweettooth isn't dead, this is good ;o) Well, I hope he isn't dead, that's what I think ;o)Why was the flesheater eating his own arm? I wouldn't mind Leo being my cat ;o) Purrrrrrrrrrrrr... ;o)))
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for more!!! Excellent my friend ;o) xoxoxo
Many, if not all those questions will be answers in "Sex Witch," the next installment. I can't wait to share it!
DeleteOh, I'll tell Leo about your comment, and I'll make sure to keep the knowledge away from Luna, who knows how she would take it ;-)
Oh, I am so thankful that Sweettoth is not dead. I love the sexual tension between Leo and Luna. It is the perfect balance of uncertainty of mind but undenialble pull of the heart and/or soul and/or body. ;-) This story is comming along wonderfully. Big hugs sweetie!
ReplyDeleteI'm enjoying the unraveling of Luna and Leo's story quite a bit. They, and the crows, keep on going to places that I didn't know existed, and Sweettooth? well, that fellow is a constant surprise...
DeleteOkay, I really need spellcheck on my comment. Sweettooth, not Sweetoth. LOL
ReplyDeleteYou sound like me lol
DeleteI'm so anxious for part 4! More please!
ReplyDeleteMe too!
Deletei like it a lot!! the twists and turns...ins and outs. i can really picture it all as i read! keep going...moremoremore. :)
ReplyDelete"moremoremore" you shall get... tomorrow ;-)
DeleteMara blood and more please.....
ReplyDeleteI'm pretty sure we'll get more mara and more witch blood, so you will be pleased!
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