Wow! Excellent story and intense! I'm lovin this...I want more! lol
I love the way you can immediately pull me into the scene with the characters, M. It's such a rare gift.Thank you for sharing. I want more too!
Really captures the intensity, anxiety and pressure of the situation. Great flash, Magaly. =)
What happens next???????
Intense. Great discription. This? --> "constipate the crap out of me.” Hilarious. To me. I have a 6th grade sense of humor.I didn't enjoy reading this because it reminded me too much of training, but it was very well captured ;-)And a camouflaged hat? Really, Marine?
MidnightSage - You might get your wish. Soon.Kallan - Glad you found it engaging.John - Thanks.Penny - Soon...Colleen - I know exactly what you mean, and I emailed you about the hat lol
great story telling! you got me anxiously waiting to see what happens next. ps- Colleen is not the only one who has a 6th grade humour, lol!
Wow, Magaly! Every nerve ending is still leaving a tingling feeling all over my skin. I "feel" it too. What "it" is, I can't be sure yet, but it's there...coming.What an amazing glimpse you've given!
Magaly, this is very intense! You got me pulled in right away! Wow!! I can't wait for more! I think there is alot more to this story!I'm with Colleen and PinkGlitterFae! 6th grade humour! LOL!
Wow! I lived reading that! Great writing, I too want more! Thank you so much for sharing. Many blessings!
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I am nearly speechless! Magaly, that is incredible. Wonderful cliff hanger. I must know what happens next and you need to be published!
I love this! I want more of this!<3
PinkGlitterFae - Great to know ;-) because I'm working on the rest of the piece. And I'm sooo glad you guys my 6th grade humor because I enjoy writing it and laughing at it.Green Witch - It's a bit surreal, isn't it?Magic Love Crow - Hooray! I shall give you more ;-)Colleen - On my way to claim it and I shall display it, proudly, soon.Mina - Your are too sweet!LJ - Ask and you shall receive. Soon...
This is amazing, my dear! You pulled me in right from the get go into a genre I'm typically not interested in (military, war and survival type stories are more my love's cuppa tea) which is a phenomenal credit to your ability to create. Even more so, because I want to know what happens next! :-)
You enticed me right into your world! Loved this story and I hope they make it out okay??!!HugsSueAnn
Danni - You made me grin like a loon ;-DSueAnn - We'll have to see what happens...
Crappola in a basket, Magaly this is a great read, wooo but painful if based on true story...Totally visual, I felt as I was watching from behind another log, or maybe up a tree, thank God no one saw me, but I was a friendly ;)
Shelle - You just made me laugh sooo loud.
Scarey ... they might even shoot friendlies...Keep me in mind when you need to put pics in your books...
Judy - Judy that is the nicest request I've received in a long time! Gracias ;-)And on the sad part, yes, bullets tend to be blind. Scary.
My heart breaks at war stories, it's hard to imagine what soldiers must go through and the tough decisions they have to make.