Misty Lake

He took her to his special place; to the spot where Nature’s fog and manmade lights, played purplish games over still dark waters.

He kissed and licked her neck.

She closed her eyes, grinded her silk-clad breasts against his chest, and breathed in the delicious musk that oozed out of his being. She thought he had a killer smile, and strong hands that could do anything.

He proved her right, on both counts.

Her strangled body decays in Misty Lake.


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The photograph was courtesy of Doug Hickok.
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14 comments:

  1. Very intense, good choice of words. Of course I wondered how she would remain at the bottom of the lake. ^^

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  2. Gotta love a man who's good with his hands... ;)

    One tiny suggestion, I think the comma in the first line is unnecessary. Otherwise, it's great. A short, sharp, dark shock. =)

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  3. @Diandra, brick, huge iron ball, 100 lbs iron bar, let your imagination pick lol

    @John, great catch. That comma made sound a little weird indeed.

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  4. You have the power of words.

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  5. And you, my friend, have the power of effective flattery ;-) Not to mention a powerful way with a camera and imagery interpretation.

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  6. wow, erm....hooked!!! need more pleeeaaasssseeeee pretty lady please! lol xxx

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  7. HOLY SHIT!
    Nice!
    How gripping!
    ;p

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  8. Very good micro Magaly, slightly poetic to start, and a good punch to finish with. The pic works well too.

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  9. @Pixie, glad you enjoy your murders. I knew I loved you for a reason lol

    @Cogent, I enjoy your expressive nature my friend.

    @Steve, The pic was what started it all. I saw it and BOOM!

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  10. Wow! LOVED that. Truly.

    And now, I'm afraid of fog. And good kissers. :-)

    Pearl

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  11. Good kissers are scary, which is why they make your knees all shaky and stuff ;-D

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  12. wow, thats eery!!
    and I like it!!
    :D

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  13. Misty Lake and Misty Boston, how cool! Glad you liked it!

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  14. Wickedly creepy, yet entertaining :) you've made my day!!!

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